religion.
force feed me
candy coated
chaos
masked as salvation
so at least
the trip to hell
can taste
a little bit sweet
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posted by Voices Vindicated @ 7:38 AM
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Voices Vindicated
"We could flood the streets with love or light or heat, whatever." -MGMT
Friday, June 1, 2012
candy coated
chaos
masked as salvation
so at least
the trip to hell
can taste
a little bit sweet
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- Name: Voices Vindicated
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love this. short and sweet, and powerful. nice assonance with "candy coated chaos." i think assonance is the right word. Sound, I mean. I like how each line in your poetry is short and stands alone, to give the reader a stronger sense of contemplation. Like you're asking the reader to be more careful, tread more slowly. This poem strikes a strong chord with me, and I feel like I can totally relate. Really superbly good.
-Susie
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