On Letting Go
On Letting Go
I’ve searched the world to find a light,
to keep and call my own
and when it’s caught, I’ll hold on tight:
No thought of letting go.
For years I’ve hunted without fail
when on a hopeless night
I glimpse the trace of a star’s trail.
I trap it without a fight.
My fingers grasp this immortal blaze,
never to be freed.
This conviction shall not be swayed,
no matter how the star might plead.
Light squeezes through my blackened hands
attempting to escape;
but it will stay while I grow old,
to be entombed with my fate.
Labels: Faye Duterte

1 Comments:
My favorite lines in this poem are "but it will stay while I grow old, to be entombed with my fate." I like these lines because they speak for the speaker as well as for the star. The speaker traps the star, and so their fates are resolved as one by the end of the poem. It's a beautiful ending, though it comes with a bit of a fight and a kind of pained acquiescence (?) on the star's part. I like the way the speaker's persistence kind of "glows," though, somewhat fiercely, and righteously.
-Susie
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